- Use five (5) of the new words from the two articles and write a LEAD paragraph for an imagined story.
- You can change or alter the tense of the words.
- Use your "I Say" connections to help you develop a story idea.
- The lead paragraph must at least answer the: who, what, when, where questions. The paragraph must have at least one simple, compound, and complex sentence.
- Use words that SOUND like the tone of the paragraph, for example: "The snow fell from the sky," sounds less exciting and vivid than, "The sticky, wet snow plunged from the sky"; "He has a nice smile, sound less exciting and vivid than, "He has an exotic, sexy smile."
- Create an EXCITING SOUNDING headline.
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Ziqi
2/15/2012 11:06:12 pm
A perfect Halloween house
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kemika kong
2/15/2012 11:08:39 pm
A family was living in a dereliction house. They were sleeping and the mother felt like something was expropriating her. But it was in a bad way. She never felt that way before and she was getting really scared because it kept waking her up in the middle of the night. The mother woke up her husband and asked him if he can nestle with her because she was that scared that she will get that weird feeling again. The next morning she woke up and in her room she seen a picturesque picture of a demon looking face. As they walked downstairs they saw there dog as if it got demolitioned.
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Marcia Phu ! :]
2/16/2012 09:33:14 am
It was there three year anniversary on February 14th, and the couple had been nestled under the moonlight on a picnic blanket, just as the clock struck twelve o’clock. The romantic moonlight expropriated the whole forest. It was a picturesque moment, and the couple had been drinking heavily when they found an abandoned cottage nearby their picnic spot. The dereliction cottage was scary and quite run down. Speculation was the only thing they could do.
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Michael AKA Davoodi :D !!!
2/16/2012 12:54:33 pm
There it was, one of the vastly sized jail compounds you’ll ever see. At first, it was an old, run down, apartment. But, the model that was shown in the prototype made it picturesque and hard to believe. Hypothetically, it was going to be manufactured on February 16, 2012; but with the precipitation in the way it was almost impossible. Most of all, if citizens were caught purposely walking towards the demolition site; they would be confined immediately on the spot and would be asked to go to court knowing that the construction workers have zero tolerance. The construction site was so immense and dangerous; they were forced to expropriate the intersection(s). In the end, the building was assembled and had the city profit a lot from it.
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Kimberly Terris (:
2/17/2012 01:45:56 am
It was mid June, when Kelley Bell went to Italy for the summer. The 17 year old left Canada on Sunday June 12. As she waited for the plane to start moving, she wondered if she had made the right choice. she wondered if leaving her family for a boy she loved was even worth it. At the time it was the perfect idea. But when Kelley arrived in Rome,Italy to meet the man of her dreams, she wasn't aware of what atrocities were about overcome her. Jeff Rellik, her so called boyfriend of a year had many secrets. That was yet to come out. They had never met in person before, they met on line on Facebook. Rellik took Kelley to his apartment and told her to sit on the couch and wait for dinner. A neighbor saw them go in and had a funny feeling. The man went to the door and heard nothing. Then went to the back and saw Jeff through the window. "He was holding knives that were bloody and abnormally large.That's when I realized that I had to get help." Said the man police later pronounced as 32 year old Sam Auburn. Police arrived on the scene in less then ten minutes after Auburn made the call and explained what was going on. Turns out the police have been looking for Mr. Rellik for almost two years. Due to psychological problems during his childhood, he found murdering teenage girls "enjoyable." The police had shot Rellik twice in the back and once in the leg. They found Kelley past out on the couch with drugs in her system. That later had to be removed in the hospital. The young women's family come as soon as the police informed them of what was happening. At the time Miss. Bell was in Vancouver on trip with her youngest. She was aware that her daughter was going to see her grandmother and not a mad man. The police highly recommend that parents check their children's online social networking accounts to make sure this doesn't happen again. The police were fast enough this time, but that may not happen again.
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Hamsa
2/22/2012 09:24:36 am
Why'd you delete my comment ?!?!
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asha
2/28/2012 11:10:26 pm
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